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TPower's avatar

I really like how you weave in a bit of archaic language, it feels nostalgic. I do something similar. This was a fun piece to read!

Jonathan Hadinger's avatar

Oooh thank you, thank you! I had a lot of fun with blurring the lines between archaic and obscure vocabulary and the made-up words found in Carroll’s original poem.

TPower's avatar

I quite like it!

Zane Paxton's avatar

Definitely caught onto the Carroll vibes. Great stuff!

Jonathan Hadinger's avatar

Thanks for reading Zane!

Timothy Nisly's avatar

Great poem for jaunting across wabe and field